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Hold the Cliche - How to Write an traditional Love Poem

First of all, obtain your thoughts on what is all about your poem. Think of an suitable title that carries the whole idea of your poem. Good title has great impact to the reader's mind. If the title looks exquisite for them they will have the desire to read the whole poem.

Unlike an narrative that is made up of paragraphs, poem is made up of stanzas and rhymes. And like a song, poem has its own beating which give the reader more delight in reciting it.

Love Poem

Your poem will need a lot of real emotions in order to make it real. You need to pour your heart into it. As you go deep in your compound the deeper your emotion is needed. You must feel the pain, the joy and anything feelings you want to transport and that you wish the reader will feel the same.

Aside from your heart, your brain will be twisted a puny bit mental on how to rhyme your words.

And to be consistent, you must follow word counts as you build the story you gathered in your thoughts.

And now if you already saved a draft, narrate and revise it till you are satisfied. Now you have poem.

Here's a sample of former heartbreaking poem;

My Broken Trust

Oh could you please stop blaming me, if the road leads to isolate way.

I stayed on tract drove steadily, but it was you who led astray.

I didn't stroll all around; my eyes were focus on your ground.

My heart is real, my love abounds, for I don't like to let you down.

As we drive through life's winding road, the weather though is very cold

We shared our vows much as we could, that lightens up our every load.

You sheltered me in your loving care; I made your world my own.

Your warm embrace, your sweetest kiss, your arms I do belong.

I put my trust, my high-priced trust to you and you alone.

I'm definite your love is mine, forever I will own.

One coldest night when sleep was tight, the moon don't shed its light.

You're mumbling forth a pretty name; I heard it clear and bright.

Is there something you want to hide, I didn't realize.

I let it go; I let it pass for everything's alright.

And up one day you got a call, you said you need to go.

Is it for work or anywhere, I just wanted to know?

You said it's just a friend of yours, who has nothing to do.

But in your eyes your telling me, you're lying aren't you?

Here comes the mail, are they just bills? But with it something new.

Guess what is it? A soft pink card, it's written just for you.

I watched you shake a puny bit; you don't know what to do.

I handed the mail, and there you go! Love quotes from her to you.

My world went whirling all around, to know you cheated me.

Despite the trust I put on you, how dare you to betray.

Just read the card and you will see, she's missing you today.

You can't deny, with kiss she sealed, for you exclusively.

It's hard for me to understand about your treacherous way.

For all I know your love is mine, that's what you promise me.

But now I come to realize, my eyes can clearly see.

Your words are words just flowery words; they're just easy to say.

My mind is shattered, my world seemed to end, my heart is truly crashed,

I'm so confuse, what will I do, our love is soon to last.

I felt the love we used to have is leaving on a rush.

I look at you and hope you'll know about my broken trust.

Hold the Cliche - How to Write an traditional Love Poem

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